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We used to talk about many things, but since a few weeks ago our conversations have dwindled to asking each other about our respective love lives and doling out relationship advice, usually on my part. Not that I would know; I have never been in an official relationship, although I’ve been in several sort-of ones. But I guess that’s the consultant coming out in me.

You’ve always told me to follow my dreams, whatever those are. When people ask me about what I want to do in the future, my official answer is still “I don’t know”, as it has been for years. The truth is, I do know: I want to compose musicals. Except it sounds so much more far-fetched than consulting or banking, or public policy or developmental economics. It shall remain my little secret until I make it big, or it’ll wither away, unbeknownst to most people. To them, I’m just another Chinese kid studying economics, albeit with more musical talent and an unusual fondness for theatre (especially musical theatre; I love musicals the way you love good food).

After the third time you told me to “follow your dreams” (or the fourth time, I didn’t count), I asked you if working at an investment bank was your dream. You said you were still figuring it out. It certainly sounded glamorous when you told me you were out in a bar “with some other bankers”. It sounded like the life you told me you wanted. When you took me to the Bund that night in June, you pointed out to me in mock eloquence of how the Bund was ablaze with lights and the city abuzz with energy. The banks and skyscrapers and bars and restaurants along Zhongshan Road and the Huangpu River – these were places where the rich went to work and afterwards to have a good time. You pointed to a tall curved building across the river, brightly lit. That was where you were going to start working next week, at Morgan Stanley.

“Isn’t it beautiful?” you murmured.

“Not bad.” It was a handsome building at night. (But the following week, when you showed me the view from a vice president’s office window, I was disgusted by the gray mess of buildings and roads and cars.)

As we crossed the street to head back to the subway station, you asked me if I could live without the bars and the good restaurants. It was meant to be rhetorical, but I answered yes, I could. You wouldn’t believe me at first.

“Imagine marrying someone rich. You wouldn’t have to work and you can go to bars and good restaurants and parties for the rest of your life.”

“Not for the rest of my life. A year, maybe. Then I’d get bored. I would have no purpose in life.”

You shook your head, still skeptical. “The world is materialistic. That’s how life is. When you get older you’ll understand.”

Sometimes you can be condescending like that, which I choose to accept. After all, you are a grade above me but almost three years older. I look up to you, at how popular and easy-going you are, at how you completed a challenging finance program a year ahead of most students. I used to envy the way you could be at your internship during the day and go out with friends at night, a different group of friends each day of the week. I had never fully grasped the meaning of “work hard, play hard” until I met you. But then, this was before Morgan Stanley.

After you started the second internship of the summer, our conversations started getting shorter. You started sending me messages at 8 pm my time and 10:30 pm your time saying you “just get home.” This phrase made the list of things you tell me most often, along with “follow your dreams” and “went to the bar with my friends”. In fact, I almost came to expect this message at 8 pm every other night. If you didn’t get home at 10:30, you were usually out at a bar or KTV with your fellow bankers, and I’d receive a message an hour later about a girl who was hitting on you.

“Is she cute?” I would ask, although after all the discussions we had about our love lives, I was hardly interested anymore.

“She’s okay,” you’d reply. “Not interested. Too much work.”

Last night, you told me you were exhausted from work. I wasn’t at all surprised; you told me this pretty often too, “so tired,” or “had a bad day.” But then you told me you met your “best friend for life” last night, the one you had been trying to move on from for four years, the reason for an evening of advice from me two weeks earlier.

“How did it go?”

“I wasn’t interested in her anymore.”

I thought that was a good thing, until you told me you felt as if you had no more capacity for love.

“We should help each other,” you said.

Someday, I may end up charging for my advice. But last night, I gave it free.
The Bund is Ablaze With Lights
A reflection about my relationship with my investment banker friend.

This is the first non-fiction piece I've uploaded on dA, so any critique or comments are appreciated.

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Clevina

Artist | Literature
United States
19, college student, occasional writer
I take photos, play the piano, sing, do homework, procrastinate, etc. I'm particularly good at the last one.
Stop by and say hi. :aww:

DDs:
"The Price of Dying" (January 5, 2013)

DLDs:
"Recrudescence" (September 3, 2012)
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  • Mood: Happy
My first DD! :dance: Thank you so much thorns for featuring my work! And thanks to all the people who faved, commented and watched. I'll get back to you soon...hopefully. :)

What's been happening:
:bulletblue: I sent in all of my college apps on New Year's Eve
:bulletblue: I have my first college interview in two days
:bulletblue: I have three major assignments due this coming week but I got sick and I don't feel good so I don't feel like doing them
:bulletblue: I watched all episodes of Modern Family...it's hilarious
:bulletblue: I hope I get into college

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:woohoo: :party: :iconcakelickplz: !!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY !!! :iconcakelickplz: :party: :woohoo:

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Jasperinity Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
Happy birthday! :D
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Clevina Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014   Writer
Thank you! And happy birthday to you as well! :)
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Jasperinity Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2014
You're welcome, and thanks a bunch! c:
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rainylake Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I hope you have a wonderful birthday! :cake: :party:
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notsuperunnatural Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hi!! Thank you very much for the favourite! Your poetry is fantastic!
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Clevina Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013   Writer
Thank you!
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CreativeSawsan Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Um..Hi..~
I just stopped by to ask you something..~
Do you know how can we upload a picture from the web,or from my pc so that it can appear in any of my journals?
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brietta-a-m-f Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the fave! I'm glad you like my work!
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Clevina Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013   Writer
You're welcome! :D
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